@aherve

“Really good drawing !! I find it hard to say something. I have an hesitation on the tail, It seems too on the side to be this tense and rigid. BUT drawing it more behind would hurt the silhouette...”

“Hello ! The pose seems more dynamic and fun this way indeed. Some feedbacks: I tried to place my feet like that, it hurts. I would change the pose slightly. Also I the arm in front is bigger and...”

“First, great drawing ! I'm still an amateur but I find option B more interesting: - More asymetrical => more energy, - The interesting parts (body + face + knife) are on a third line of the pic...”

“First thanks for the art tips you provide ! I think I have seen a lot of melee fighters amongst the mermaids so what about going ranged ? We could change the weapons from double swords to bow and h...”