its kind of hard to draw over on my phone, but mainly i would advice readjusting the pose to have a clearer sillouethe and using the direction the eyes of the characters are looking at to match what the viewer should look at,eyes are very powerful tools in an imsge, they tell you where to look, or what the character cares and knows about . also having the bow in a more cnetral position could help but i wasnt able to change that right now. also having nore detail inbthe bow than in the rest of the picture would tell the viewer that it is important. | Artwod Feedback