Hello! I actually really like the dimness of the drawing, I think it works in its favor, the bigger issue im seeing is the contrast between the girl and the background. She kinda melts into the drawing, and there isnt really a focal point because of it. All I really did was add a light filter with the same colors as the lights in the background to increase her contrast, and imply that soft light coming from one of the windows on her right. It really gets her to pop right out of the picture, and you could probably even go even subtler than what I did, and it would still work, just get some of that contrasting yellow against the blue, and shes gonna look great, overall this piece is gorgeous and well painted, and I love it. | Artwod Feedback