Hi! Your art is so cool!! I made both of their hands and the blue character's front leg bigger, because objects that are closer to the camera should be bigger (foreshortening). I think it makes it look a little more natural! I darkened the bottom, since I felt like there was kind of a lack of visual hierarchy contrast-wise (as in, no area had more or less contrast than another). Now, the area around their faces and hands have higher contrast than their legs and feet, which makes them stand out and make them easier to focus on. This is also the reason why I darkened the background a little, to increase the contrast and make the characters stand out (especially their heads). The last thing I did was add some shadows at their feet to make them feel more grounded, since you already added a floor. I love this piece and your characters are so awesome!! I hope this helps!
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I did some change to the skin color and the pants and now the character pops out more. Please, if there are any feedback regarding other things. Thanks a bunch!
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Hey there, thanks for sharing your art! I love the expressions you pulled off here! Something I noticed when taking your image into grey scale is that a lot of your "bright" local values are very close in their value range (especially up against your chosen back ground. I think pushing your saturation further with some of the chosen colors may help some of contrast you are looking for and help things read better! I noticed this especially with the pants for example, where around areas of the smaller characters thighs, the value used there had higher contrast than say their shirt versus the face. I think if you were to add higher contrast in the face value wise and bring down the contrast in the pants, it will also help direct you audience to the focal point (like that awesome chuckle you have for them).
Thank you so much for the feedback! I did some change to the colors you mentioned and I'm love the result, in my eye its not dull anymore and the girl skin pops out more.