Hi! I really like how the atmosphere and pose! I would slightly adjust the proportions and pose to match what I understand of human anatomy, including symmetry in the face and an approx 1: 1.5 or 1: 2 head to shoulder width proportion. Of course, artistic stylizations can be made. other than that, I love the rendering of the eyes, and I thought the colors looked pretty when there is a reddish tone to unify them. hope this is of help!
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This is considered to be my first attempt of making a painting style of a drawing without heavily relying on line art. I will say for myself, it looks decent, I like it, but how can I push it further and make it better? If possible.
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Hello! You did an awesome job for a first attempt! I think all you really need to do is go harder on the contrasts with your lights and darks to give her more 3d form. I hope this drawover is helpful!
thx a lot