Your pose is pretty stiff and feels a little lifeless. I think you need to add some gesture. The design is cool and I like how you kept the folds in the costume simple. Folds and wrinkles help describe the form and perspective, which gives things dimension, but in my sketch I added some folds at the knee to help clarify where they are. I hope the sketch is helpful :)

The woodland scout - Perspective and Form - Community Driven Art Feedback Platform

Dante LastName · 2026-08-18T17:46:00.702Z

i think the pose is off primarily the arm thats holding the axe. other than that, i wanted to know what is lacking here that a professional would have. i would have rendered it more but i feel like its off already at this stage. usually i would explore many ideations before going into detail but i wasnt sure if i could meet the quality so i made this. (also i have no idea what category to put this in)

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Your pose is pretty stiff and feels a little lifeless. I think you need to add some gesture. The design is cool and I like how you kept the folds in the costume simple. Folds and wrinkles help describe the form and perspective, which gives things dimension, but in my sketch I added some folds at the knee to help clarify where they are. I hope the sketch is helpful :)

The woodland scout

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