Hello! I really like your insticts for design, I think the character is really cute, and I like how her eye gets bigger in the glass! However, the perspective grid you used on the floor is incorrect. They do not all go to the same vanishing point, which already sets you up for struggling with the perspective. For you, I think you should practice your forms, squares, cylinders, ect, and getting them to feel solid and believable in perspective. Like I said, your knack for design is great, you have great eyes, and are ambitious, all good things, and I dont want to discourage trying something like this! But even this would be difficult for me! Keep studying up on perspective and your basic forms first, but dont forget to have fun too and try to apply your knowledge in your pieces! | Artwod Feedback