Hi! I think the faces are mostly ok and are interesting in this style, they just need slight tweaks. When drawing faces (and head) try to use guidelines (determine center of the face, direction, main landmarks - you can learn more about it either from Artwod's portrait road or tutorials online, e.g. Loomis head). I would also suggest flipping canvas horizontally to check for potential mistakes. Paintover: Woman: I fixed her left eye - in 3/4 view the furthest eye curves more along the face edge. Also hid irises partly under the eyelids. Normally, when iris is fully visible it is either when the person is angry, scared, surprised or sick(see A). Man: his body language suggest that he is turned more towards the woman so I changed the face accordingly. Girl: she is mostly fine, except cheekbone is protruding too far and part of the mouth was drooping too much. | Artwod Feedback

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I can't get the faces to look exactly right. They look uncanny and I'm not sure why Any other feedback would be greatly appreciated!

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@yurei471Hace 1 semana

Hi! I think the faces are mostly ok and are interesting in this style, they just need slight tweaks. When drawing faces (and head) try to use guidelines (determine center of the face, direction, main landmarks - you can learn more about it either from Artwod's portrait road or tutorials online, e.g. Loomis head). I would also suggest flipping canvas horizontally to check for potential mistakes. Paintover: Woman: I fixed her left eye - in 3/4 view the furthest eye curves more along the face edge. Also hid irises partly under the eyelids. Normally, when iris is fully visible it is either when the person is angry, scared, surprised or sick(see A). Man: his body language suggest that he is turned more towards the woman so I changed the face accordingly. Girl: she is mostly fine, except cheekbone is protruding too far and part of the mouth was drooping too much.

@jaffthepureHace 1 semana

THANK YOU VERY HELPFUL +++

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Hi! I think the faces are mostly ok and are interesting in this style, they just need slight tweaks. When drawing faces (and head) try to use guidelines (determine center of the face, direction, main landmarks - you can learn more about it either from Artwod's portrait road or tutorials online, e.g. Loomis head). I would also suggest flipping canvas horizontally to check for potential mistakes. Paintover: Woman: I fixed her left eye - in 3/4 view the furthest eye curves more along the face edge. Also hid irises partly under the eyelids. Normally, when iris is fully visible it is either when the person is angry, scared, surprised or sick(see A). Man: his body language suggest that he is turned more towards the woman so I changed the face accordingly. Girl: she is mostly fine, except cheekbone is protruding too far and part of the mouth was drooping too much.

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