@jaffthepure

“The thick line art on the building makes it pop out against the thin line art used for you main subject. Using thinner or colored lines might help it not stand out so much.”

“Your OG design looks AWESOME imo. I had some ideas to give it some variety but I'm hardly professional. I felt adding some color to the jewelry might make for a more interesting palette and that so”

“This is just how I've started doing hair. You might also consider using thinner line art for hair details. Hair is thin after all and it may help keep it from looking blocky. Keep working at it :D”