@paw4d00w

“Perhaps animals on the back?”

“If u want smth more detailed, this could help!”

“Use references!”

“Tried to explain it in one piece”

“More depth into shadow and different composition”

“Make neck shorter and head a little bigger”

“Dont use gray shadows for ur artwork. Suggest using more purple and pinkish tones. Perhaps orange between light and shadow for vibrant depth”

“Suggesting to make eyes bigger and more far away from each other. If youre drawing in procreate, try blending shadows abit to add depth :D”

“Make both mortys bigger so eyes fall on that detail firstly. Right now the composition is kind of poorly made since both pieces almost on the same level. Also perhaps fix classic morty chin and eye p”

“Add more yellow colour into the work to balance it!”

“I suggest not blending the shadows on the neck and etc. It makes work dirtier and less dity/understandable. Perhaps same lineart on all pieces. Ur artwork has its own lines on every side which isn't v”

“Use small and circle brushes for sketches. It helps making less dirt in ur work”

“Legs seem to short for the whole body and perhaps more accessories? They could help to add volume !”

“Hope this helps!”

“Use references”

“Body is okay but isnt really flexible and proportions are off”

“Dont overrender the clothes and try to use easier logic on the shadows!”

“I think u should add more vibrant colours on the shadow like orange and perhaps chiaroscuro (the light part in the shadow) for more depth. Ur work is great but its a bit blank”

“Problem mostly in face proportions, thats all :D”

“More detail on the face and prob neck ndshadows”

“Head kinda got flat by the top and is not right. Whole work is pretty cool and aestethic but misses more deep shadow and light. Body is also kinda slim :sob:”

“Try using references and practicing posing”

“More depth into the shadow and reflexes on the clothes/face!”

“Its left hand not right :sob:”