@natan94425

“your perspective is good but as you said your rendering need some worke espeacely your use of air brush its just not inof hard edges and your siloet is good exepet in the head i tihnk the fethers ar”

“your drwaing is good but your rendering is to soft aspecely in the face when you need the most contrast exept for that your art is fenominal and the moons also drive to much atntion i tried to make th”

“i think you did a perty good joob with tihs drwing but your drwaing is a litel bit blend becus you have no contrast between light an shdow so i tried to show in my overpaint how you can improve on th”