@keewie

“Hi, I think this looks great! A few things I would suggest improving is the composition of the head and body. The ears should be around the same height as the eyes, and the eyes should differ in shape...”

“You're doing great and Miku looks very expressive! I apologize for the poor handwriting; it's because I'm on the computer. My advice is to work on the overall shape of the figure/body. You'll see that...”

“I'm not great at giving advice so I can't say for sure what you're missing. However, I did notice that the dog's eyes weren't equal in shape and were looking at different directions.”