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“Here are some proportions you can study. And how to give you jawline and eyes some structure.”

“Here with a bit more refinement and freckels.”

“Focus on structure. It will be much easier to add details on top of. Here is an example.”

“I think you have a very cool drawing made. I wouldn’t change anything if you were to painting it. But you could refine the hands and shoes if you wanted to have just the lineart. I had fun addin...”

“Focus on structure (construction of mannequins). Understanding shading and clothing comes as a consequence of understanding form and their construction. You need more practice with the fundamen...”

“The structure is on the right. Try also creating the structure on the left with a posed mannequin as an under drawing. Be mindful of the camera placement (eye level). If the camera is pointing a th...”

“I guess it technically could be possible to see it in a reference that her head overlaps his cheekbone and his nose overlaps her head/hair. Visually it reads better to have his entire head in fron...”

“You’ll find it easier to add details when you have a clear structural under drawing.”

“Focus on getting a clear and solid construction and use reference.”