I love your linework and style. Great composition, it really tells a story. The back leg is great, don't worry about it. Maybe you would see a slither of the right leg behind the right wing, but it could also be behind that wing... The thing to improve on is the yawning. When someone yaws, the head will tilt back and the eyes will always close firmly. It's impossible to do a full yawn with the eyes open. I really hope you will colour this one in, because it really deserves to. Again, love your style! | Artwod Feedback