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Improve your shading and light control, a 3 min read
Master comic storytelling by blocking shapes, simplifying forms into mannequins, imitating professional styles, then creating your own narrative-driven panels.
Rendering


ringo oc
This piece is still a work in progress, but I would really appreciate some feedback on the composition and any other aspects you think could be improved

Cell Shade and Construction(Need critique)
Practice doing cell shading on simple geometric shapes before moving on to more complex shapes. I'm focusing on just light and shadow, so no mid tones. Boxes are easier to shade but some more organic/rounder edges like cylinders makes shading more difficult. I also added arrows for the direction of light. I especially having difficulties shading the top curve tub. Side note: I purposely didn't shade the biggest box so the addition and reduction of shades becomes more prominent, but I would just shade the whole left side if I shaded it.

Deer/Rabbit/Canid Anatomy
One of my friends asked if I would be willing to draw his fursona (something I haven’t done before) and I said sure! The subject is a jacakalope (mule deer and rabbit hybrid) with canine teeth, inspired by some taxidermy he saw. I need some help with the anatomy, I’m really struggling with making the face look right and if you have any feedback on the anatomy of the rest of the pose or any other general feedback I would LOVE to hear it. So please let me know all of your thoughts!! :)

Figure drawing
Trying to make my gestures better, any kind of feedback is welcome. In my opinion I should focus on anatomy more but what's your take on it? Thanks in advance.

Learning heads
Tried my best to do heads in different methods. Something feels off. If you got any help i would like to read it. Thanks!

Statue study
My best work so far, but my problem is I don’t know how to improve from here. Need someone else to show me what’s wrong/how to elevate this piece

Hands... AGAIN
Still struggling with hands. Can anyone help? Any suggestions will do.

Kim jung gi reference #1
What do i need to improve?

Kero
Hello, I'm looking on advice to make this piece more striking (mainly the background and what I could do), additionally I'd like some help on the rendering of the clothes as it's one I struggle with, thanks.