Its not that its too dark, but when you put the piece into b/w, its majority midtones. I dont think you need to go back into the rendering, but adding a multiply layer (or adjusting the curves settings) to exaggerate the darkest darks and light areas will make the composition much more visually interesting. (i cant do it myself on this drawing tool but hopefully you get what i mean). Youre composition subject-wise is very intersting and im loving the diagonal!!!! | Artwod Feedback