Kris Deltarune - Rendering - Community Driven Art Feedback Platform

Hero Atkinson · 2026-08-03T00:21:42.794Z

As much as I really like this drawing since I’m not very good with texturing and lighting, something about it seems wrong still. It feels a little too flat and I’m not sure if it’s the colors or lighting? Honestly anything would be helpful! ESPECIALLY with the water, I can’t grasp that at all

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