Hello there! I really like the theme of the illustration, but the fact that the values aren't grouped is what makes everything feel a bit off. I'm assuming the light source is coming from above, but right now almost everything is illuminated, which makes the image feel flat. Instead, if you group the darker values, such as the lower part of the scene, parts of the character's clothing, and the underside of the sink, and avoid using pure blacks for elements like the mirror frame and the characters' clothing, the image will immediately feel more harmonious. Even more so, if you follow the direction of the light and only illuminate the planes that are exposed to it, you'll achieve a much stronger sense of volume and lighting. Notice how the illustration reads much better this way. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback