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Improve your shading and light control, a 3 min read
Master pen and ink rendering through four progressive exercises: build value scales, shade basic forms, study organic objects, and create imaginary inventions using texture and light.
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monster girl
struggle with shading look flat and idk how to fix it(all drawing)

Project hail mary
Somthing about the colours feel off

Portrait Man 2
20min portrait. Largely the same problem, I can’t place value and in particular I feel the hair levels down the overall drawing. I also don’t feel like that looks like a closed eye, so it might be a problem with structure as well.

Portrait Man
A ten minute portrait. I have been studying the loomis book for a bit and also just a hint of Oliver sin (though I feel I’m not good enough to get a substantial improvement from Oliver just yet.) The problem is that I’m having a hard time placing shadows, I know loomis goes over that but I haven’t got to that point yet, also I feel as if the structure isn’t that good.

Soifon fan art
any advice for this drawing i need learn eyes mouth and some hand

Group photo
The girl on the far right looks weird but idk how to fix it, would love some help with proportions

S-Fy panel
What can I improve ?

portrait
I'm looking for advice on what to work on

deltarune fanart
i nead somomeone to tell me what can i fix in my art