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Improve your values and blending, a 3 min read
Master pen and ink rendering through four progressive exercises: build value scales, shade basic forms, study organic objects, and create imaginary inventions using texture and light.
Rendering


adoptable but something looks off......
eyes are far apart and the anatomy with legs looks not good at all

Frog
Trying to move from construction to some rendering, but I feel like I'm loosing the structure when I do that. Should I not focus as much on rendering and just go with simpler indications?

This,,, noob thing, one of my Noobsonas
I want main design (more animalistic one) to be more visually interesting, but also not "animal but with Roblox noob colors)

Torin
The proportions feel out of whack. How can I make a nose look nice on this?

jeffrey bezos
Uhhhhhh forgot to post last week's exercise... it was form manipulation. I don't think i did too poorly, but i definitely made some mistakes, especially in the ellipse-box in the bottom left corner. But what do you all think? Pleas let me know!

perspective study
hello.. i need help with perspective or praportion

Tower of the Central Plains
I'd really appreciate some feedback from someone with concept art experience. What could I do to improve this?

Fursona
I'm unsure how to get the right face shape and how to get the ears right. All of it seems a little off

Second digital art oc
Wondering if anyone thinks there are elements missing or I could add to. Also I struggle a bit with face shading and lighting. have fun with it!!