Hey there! Sorry for the late reply. At this point, the feedback might not be all that useful anymore... but anyway, here are a few thoughts. I like that the outfit feels justified by the environment the character lives in. That said, I think there are a few things you could improve in the front-view presentation. I'd like to see the character wearing the goggles; I think it adds more storytelling to the pose. You could even make the lenses a reddish color (remember that lenses like these help filter sunlight and improve visibility during the day). That color would also create a stronger contrast around the head area. I would make the backpack a bit larger as well. If the character collects items during their expeditions, a small backpack doesn't really communicate that idea very effectively. I'm also not fully convinced by the compass in the character's hand. I think it would be stronger if they were interacting with one of the props you've already highlighted in the callouts. You could also add more dirt and wear to the clothing, something that suggests these are the clothes the character actually uses during desert excursions. Right now, the outfit feels a little too clean and new. Keep in mind the storytelling, that's an important aspect! As for the presentation sheet itself, I would make the head callout larger and perhaps include an additional facial expression besides the one you've already shown. Make the callouts larger overall and ensure the text is readable. I couldn't read any of the notes you wrote, so I have no idea what makes each callout special, particularly the staff attached to the character's back. Hope this helps!
