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Character design feedback request

Hello! I would appreciate some feedback on my character design. The setting of this character is a post-apocalyptic desert world filled with dunes, ruins, and abandoned technology. In this world, even broken technological devices are considered valuable, especially because of the remaining energy sources hidden inside old components and machinery. The character survives by scavenging and collecting these technological parts. Because of their value, competition is common, and there is always the risk of encountering raiders, dangerous and fierce rivals, or dangerous travelers. The costume was designed with practicality and environmental storytelling in mind: -Layered clothing for protection against harsh weather -A scarf/wrap to protect the face from sand and maintain anonymity -Gaiters over the boots to prevent sand from entering -Functional travel-oriented equipment and carrying solutions Personality-wise, the character is cautious, serious, and sometimes stubborn. he tries to avoid direct conflict whenever possible and prefers surviving through awareness and careful decision-making rather than aggression. The rest of the information is included in the design sheet. I would mainly like feedback on Character design readability, Costume design and problem-solving, Believability/functionality of the outfit and gear, Rendering quality, Areas that feel weak, unclear, or underdeveloped, Suggestions for improvement overall Thank you for your time and feedback!

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