Hey! You already have a solid foundation, but I think you need to push the shadows a bit more, making them darker so the character’s body volume and the forms in general become much clearer. As for the composition, I can’t give very specific feedback since I don’t know the full context of the character. However, one thing that could really help improve the composition is the storytelling. Think about how you can better communicate the character’s story. For example: why is the character holding a scythe? What happened before this moment? Maybe they used it to cut something? Try asking yourself these questions: What? Why? and How? Answering those questions can help you create stronger storytelling, which in turn will improve the overall composition of the illustration. You could also give a bit more context to the object at the top of the image. What is it, and what relationship does it have with the character? Hope this helps!
