Hey! I really like the scene and the sense of dynamism within it. However, one thing that could be improved is the interaction between the characters and how they help guide the viewer’s eye throughout the composition. For example, why would the foreground character be pointing outside of the scene? By pointing that way, you’re essentially guiding the viewer’s eye out of the canvas. If you want to keep this dynamic, you could add another element in the foreground that helps bring the viewer back into the scene. Maybe the other arm could point toward the second character? Another option would be to have this character point directly toward the character in the background. Using both arms this way creates a curve, which naturally helps guide the eye toward the focal point. Also, making the foreground character slightly smaller could help add more depth to the scene. Drawing dynamic figures is not my cup ot tea, so the pose might not look quite dynamic lol Hope this helps!
