Hello there! Good work so far! You already have a really solid foundation. The main issue here is the way the character is being lit. The skin tones shouldn’t lean so orange; because of the nighttime environment, they would generally shift more toward desaturated reddish-purple tones instead. The flower’s light would mainly affect the lower parts of the character’s muscles and, in general, any surfaces directly exposed to that light source. It can help a lot to think of the forms as simple boxes or cylinders, since that makes it easier to understand which planes are being hit by the flower’s light. On top of that, you could push the moonlight a bit more to create stronger contrast between the character and the background, and slightly overexpose the rim light around the silhouette so the character stands out more clearly. Hope this helps!
