Yo! It’s looking great so far! I really like your rendering style, combined with the line work Just a few small adjustments could push it even further: I’d increase the intensity of the light coming from the window to better highlight the character’s silhouette. Right now, the character blends a bit with the window since the values are quite similar. You could also add a touch of bright highlights (almost white) in certain areas of the character to help the silhouette stand out more. As for the smaller character: It doesn’t quite make sense to have green lighting on them if the larger character is blocking most of that light. To help separate them, you could add a bit of “fog” or haze between both characters. This would not only separate them better but also help distinguish the character from the tubes. Speaking of the tubes, I’m not sure what your intention is there, but you could try making them red. That would create a nice color contrast with the green and add more visual interest, in my opinion. Hope this helps!
