@saritos

Paintover

Hi hi! Very cool shot! I dig the mood in artwork. There are numerous distracting things near the bottom. I made the character more dark from bottom to top, concentrating solely on the light spot, as you are already utilizing spotlight light. Just make sure to use a deep color—in this case, very deep blue—instead of pure black. You can research anime styles and their shading, but I added painterly midtones to make the artwork richer. I only concentrated on larger shapes and minimized hair details because they were making the photos too noisy. Additionally you can add a bit more color variation and textures to materials and figures. Other than that, the artwork looks nice! Great job! Hope it helps!

@pvppoh

Paintover

Hi, really beautiful work! to be honest, i think the heavy contast on the face is really nice. Maybe you can play around with adding some more more prominent warm hues on the cheeks and lips and some more color saturation around the shadows. other than that i dont really draw anime so i hope this helps at all, but in a more realistic style the eye has more of a curve from that angle and you see more of the bottom lid so i applied that principle . i also drew the nose more top-down. the ear seems to be drawn from too much of a side angle so i adjusted it to the face angle more. i hope this helps at all! Love the artwork, keep it up!