Okay. We ALL went through this phase and I am HERE FOR YOU!!!!! So, first off, the placement is great, good work. Second, the lips are confusing me. You blended it out but then added a sharp line..? The pupils are also difficult. The iris is facing up but the pupil is down, contradicting the shape. The right nostril is also slightly more flared which could be fixed. Circling back to the eye shape, the left eye corner is down turned while the right is upturned. You could try some people watching, looking at yourself or references online!! Overall you're doing great and I hope you keep going!! You'll get it! Now go, be free my child!!!

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Anonymous · 2026-10-04T17:19:11.382Z

I cant get the proportion i want and the mouth is bad

@sil8 hours ago

Okay. We ALL went through this phase and I am HERE FOR YOU!!!!! So, first off, the placement is great, good work. Second, the lips are confusing me. You blended it out but then added a sharp line..? The pupils are also difficult. The iris is facing up but the pupil is down, contradicting the shape. The right nostril is also slightly more flared which could be fixed. Circling back to the eye shape, the left eye corner is down turned while the right is upturned. You could try some people watching, looking at yourself or references online!! Overall you're doing great and I hope you keep going!! You'll get it! Now go, be free my child!!!

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