First of all, I really like great drawing and coal is not an easy medium either, really great. It would be nice if you could see your template, then I could take a closer look, so I tried to show out of my head what might not quite hit me. I think the neck is a bit too thick and the shoulder line may not be quite right. You should take a close look at your picture again. Put your template upside down and your drawing next to it then you will be able to see some differences better. Otherwise very successful portrait keep it up.

Self portrait 1st day of the year - Portraits - Community Driven Art Feedback Platform

Sarbyn LastName · 2026-08-14T13:29:01.647Z

This was a self portrait i did on 1st january 2026. This was made with carcoal at the back of my personal diray. I thinck issue is the depth, ear, forehead, right eye, and the hair looks a lot like a black mass. Else this features I thinck it's not to bad. But mainly need help with face proportions.

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