hey, this is probably gonna be quite short if i overall look at these heads, the biggest thing sticking out to me is the proportions, you can divide the face into three equal spaces, i recommend learning the basics of the loomis head. in drawing 1, the chin is way too long, and the forehead should be a liiitle longer. also the head from the side is longer than it is taller, so there will be a visible plane change where the neck connects. 2. has the same proportion problems as 1, other than that it looks good. 3. i wasnt really sure what angle you were going for, so i drew two for good measure, now, the head is too long, and it also makes the neck look a bit wonky. also you should treat beard, as an actual 3d shape. hope this helps :3 | Artwod Feedback