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Improve your features and structure, a 3 min read
Build expressive portraits using the Loomis head method, Reilly rhythms, and shadow mapping to establish structure, flow, and clear lighting before adding final details.
Portraits


Untitled
I think the nose looks a little wrong and the other parts have something wrong but I can't seem to put my finger on what exactly is wrong

I'm a beginner
I'm not sure what's wrong with the proportions of the face.

I'm a beginner
I'm not sure what's wrong with the proportions of the face

Batcave design
I feel like I can't get the comic feel, my ref was Greg Capullo, Batman Court of Owls, also I feel like I'm lost in the 3d space

citrus reference sheet
something just feels so off about him, maybe its the pose maybe its the proportions i have no idea why he looks so constipated

Creature portrait practice
Here it is after receiving feedback! I’m so grateful for the advice and I’m so much happier with this piece <3

Sunset clouds
I tried rendering clouds for the first time, but i feel like the form ,highlights and shadows of the clouds are all over the place , any tips to improve will be appreciated 😊

Portrait copy of JSS
Everythinh looks off

Character sleeping in the woods
How could I improve/fix it? I’m planning on redrawing it so I would like to know what should I work on in the next drawing of the same idea