Hello sorry for my lines I still trying to master drawing on a tablet but I try to show you . You can work on your line quality and also make your hair less symetric hope my comment will help you keep going

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20min portrait. Largely the same problem, I can’t place value and in particular I feel the hair levels down the overall drawing. I also don’t feel like that looks like a closed eye, so it might be a problem with structure as well.

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A ten minute portrait. I have been studying the loomis book for a bit and also just a hint of Oliver sin (though I feel I’m not good enough to get a substantial improvement from Oliver just yet.) The problem is that I’m having a hard time placing shadows, I know loomis goes over that but I haven’t got to that point yet, also I feel as if the structure isn’t that good.

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