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How to improve my proportions and form from imagination?

@david39882967

Hi everyone, I've been trying to draw the head, and I've made some good improvements with references (the two drawings from the right are from references). But I tried to draw the girl from imagination, I drew her twice in the same position, I noticed the first try lacked perspective and the proportions were off, so I tried a second try and I think it looks way better. But i'd like to know what you could advise me to improve the likeness from several angles since I want to animate as well, and also how to improve the second try and maintain consistent with my head drawing. At the moment is a ver hit or miss thing, even with structure. Though the references one are getting more consistent, despite failing sometimes.

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