Hello ! I think so far you've done a nice job at capturing the mood of your character and the emotion. Most of the drawing is fine. I think what you're missing is more volume cues in order to create clarity. I mostly reworked the hair line. I bended a bit the eyes and the nose but this one is optional in my opinion. Try without bending the features and just rework the hair line 1st I forced a bit the left shoulder in order to exaggerate the pose and create some overlapping. And last bot not least I cheated by adding a bun, I think it can help convey the idea of volume. Working the hair is the priority to me. I think that's pretty much it. No big adjustment, I think right now it's nitpicking more than huge transformation. Feel free to reach me if you have more questions. Great piece ! Great piece ! | Artwod Feedback