Hey! The main issue with the eyes is that they’re positioned too close together. You’re not really respecting the spacing between them, which makes the face feel compressed or sunken inward. As a general rule, there’s usually about one eye’s width of space between the eyes. Keeping that in mind helps avoid drawing them too close together. Also, remember that eyes are not flat; they have volume. It would help a lot to study the structure of the eye, how it’s built, and how the surrounding forms wrap around it so you can give the eyes more depth and solidity (like in the example on the right). On top of that, keep the center line of the face in mind to properly align the nose and mouth. Right now, the mouth is positioned too low and drifts away from that center line. And finally, remember that building a proper foundation sketch first (like the image below) will help you create a much stronger and more solid drawing overall. Hope this helps!
