hi it looks nice already but to get the effect the ref artists has you need to work on your edge control. all of your edges are soft while the ref artists defining style is their clean shapes with only soft shading on the inside. see the red lines i drew on the top 2 to see just a few of those sharp edges i mean. you put them where two values contrast each other. i recommend studying where the artist puts these and backtracking why they put them there. my paint over is kinda sloppy as it is 2 am here and i should be asleep but regardless i hope it still makes sense and helps, good luck! | Artwod Feedback