Hello there! Great portraits here! I’ll focus mainly on the overall structure, since the eyes themselves aren’t too bad—especially in portraits 1 and 2. The facial features are slightly misaligned with the head. For example, in portrait #2, the nose is a bit too narrow, which makes the left eye appear closer to the right eye. Notice how the nose should be more centred, following the head’s center line. The lips should align with this line as well. In portrait #1, the nostrils were placed too close together, and the wings of the nose were a bit too small (this is the same issue in portrait #3). The eyes also feel a bit tight—remember, there should generally be about one eye’s width of space between them. The features overall were slightly misaligned too. Hope this helps!
