Hey! Nice job with the overall proportions. The only two things that were off were the mouth alignment and the size and the shape of the iris. Pay attention to the shape in particular because the rounder the iris the more realistic and alive the eyes look. As for what you could improve, you could try your hand at edge control, aka sharp edges (for sharp turns in the planes) vs soft edges (for rounder shapes) vs lost edges (edges, usually in shadow, that get lost in either shadow or light like you did for the dark side of the portrait). | Artwod Feedback