You want a tip, don't be so critical of yourself. Your drawing is anatomically correct from my point of view. You have a great style, I just think the face doesn't quite match the body, but maybe that's intentional. If you don't practice drawing faces again from different perspectives, then your face will definitely get more depth. But above all, stay tuned and have fun. I hope this helps you a little and sorry my English is written with Google Translate.











