Hi there, This drawing is really good, i think the design and rendering on the octopus is very strong and works well. Maybe just some small details around the female figure to focus on with the rendering (use of softer edges and lines) might help also particular attention around the chin is distorting the perspective. But overall this is a good image and i think composition works. Good work 👍

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Andy Schütte · 2026-10-04T01:32:57.878Z

I struggled with coming up with a proper perspective, also with the rendering and of course with gesture and composition...

Hi there, This drawing is really good, i think the design and rendering on the octopus is very strong and works well. Maybe just some small details around the female figure to focus on with the rendering (use of softer edges and lines) might help also particular attention around the chin is distorting the perspective. But overall this is a good image and i think composition works. Good work 👍 | Artwod Feedback

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