Hi, great piece of art, I like the execution, here are some notes and the overpaint: 1. for story I would move and direct the characters to face the troll, they can protect a shrine, the girl is wielding fire. 2. Troll is about to attack, the chain is still loose, but the gesture suggest he is going to throw, that is why I turned his arm and hand, also extented his far arm more. On a side note if you're having problems with the pose you can ask your friend to help you and pose him, take some photos to have an reference, or you can pose yourself in the mirror, to check if what you imagined is actually possible. 3. I have made some changes to tail form 4. Removed the decorations on the rock, since they are not in the human scale 5. Added a beam of yellow liight, to emphesize importance of human characters. Overall there is a lot of potential in this drawing, hope that my notes will help you with move foreward, keep up the good work! | Artwod Feedback