Your missing a proper pelvis in this drawing. I would suggest building your figure with a mannequin first, then add the details like clothing. Speaking of clothing, you want to use folds and wrinkles to show the underlying forms and perspective. I did a quick sketch to show you the process, I hope it helps :)

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Jan Tiu · 2026-08-23T16:49:01.039Z

I tried making another full page sketch and I would like some feedback on my perspective and form here. Any areas to improve on? Any areas that I am doing well on?

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