Hi there, You’re pretty close, you just need to push certain aspects of the pose to really sell it. If you’re ever unsure about how something should look like, use reference. Even if that means you standing in front of a mirror and acting out the pose, taking a selfie or getting a friend to help you. It will really help you because it will help you figure out what’s important and what to show. Although it does look like she’s leaning forward, she looks like she is standing a little too straight. This is because you’ve drawn the neck and the shoulders from a frontal view. If she’s bending towards the viewer from the waist then her neck will be covered by her head and we should see more of the top of her shoulders. So what I’ve done is move her head and upper chest down and given it more overlap of the forms. The blue is to demonstrate what I mean about seeing the top of her shoulders and how her ribcage should be tilted forward towards us. The other thing I changed was to make her hands bigger. As a general guide, from fingertip to palm is about the length of your hairline to your chin, and the width of the knuckles is about the same as the bottom of your nose to the bottom of your chin. | Artwod Feedback