Hi! First of all, this piece is incredibly cool! I think what's a little off might be the right arm, that bends a little too far up for the hand position to be so far down the gun. You could consider straightening the arm to match the hand, or picking the hand up to match the arm. In terms of the face, the angle of the eyes seem a little strange, since they are going up instead of down. When you look at someone from beneath, the corner of their eyes comes down. PS. I know you didn't ask about this, but I changed a bit of the clothing folds and design too. Do you have a reference for the coat? if not, look for one! I made the tie more obvious since it got lost in the coat. Black and white pieces have to be very mindful about the values, so the form can be understood! Hope this helps! :) | Artwod Feedback