Hey! Nice work so far! However, the pose is off. Notice that the tilt of the shoulders and the hips doesn't match the reference. This is something I would recommend identifying first whenever you're drawing poses like this (or really any pose): the relationship and angle between the shoulders and the hips. On top of that, find the line of action. Doing these two things will help you gain a much clearer understanding of the torso's movement and flow. Notice that there's a slight compression on the left side of the body. The torso isn't stretching upward or lifting the chest the way you've suggested in your drawing. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback