Hey there! For the “curiosity” scene, I would probably change the pose a bit. With the way it’s currently posed, the character feels more surprised than curious. So I sketched out these two alternatives. Personally, I prefer the second one, because it reminds me of how people instinctively touch things when they’re curious about something. Not even specifically kids, I do that too when I’m curious about something :p For the second scene, you could try stretching the torso more, almost as if the character were doing a full-body stretch, and then have the arm positions support that action. Personally, I like the first option more. As for the 4th scene, where they’re resting: Think about how you would naturally sit or lie down while relaxing. In my head, I imagine someone resting at the beach in a semi-reclined pose, supporting themselves with their arms. That’s why I suggested this kind of pose. It could even be funny if the character were resting on top of a jellyfish. For the 5th scene, I’d recommend moving the characters more toward the left side. Right now, they’re too close to the edge of the canvas. You generally want to avoid cutting off your main characters, so giving them more space inside the composition would help. Hope this helps!











