What can I improve?
Revision of Mermaid design WIP
I feels satisfied with the design , but i am struggling with puting the characters in a scene that would show their personalities clearly. I would appreciate feedback on the scenes and composition of the scene that i have putted the characters into. For context, the first scene is abouta mermaid curiously looking at a strange fruit. Second (downward) a mermaid streching after waking up. Third, a "hunting" event where the mermaids lures in the jelly creature into their food bank. Fourth, the phantom of the sea relaxing in the seas. Fifth(main) a innocent child mermaid playing with the creature it was supposed to hunt.