Hey! It’s looking much better now! :D Well done! :D There are just a few details that still stand out to me. One of them is atmospheric perspective. Don’t forget that objects in the background should generally have lighter values than the elements in the foreground and midground. For example, you added some rocks in the foreground (which was a good idea), but those rocks currently share almost the same values as the cave in the background, which reduces the sense of depth. Always keep checking your values while painting, that’s a golden rule for me at least :p I also adjusted the pirate’s shirt a bit. Mainly the folds and the shadow being cast by the mermaid. It makes more sense to me this way. I also increased the space between the spear tip and the pirate slightly. Having them too close together was creating a tangent. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback