Hey there! Good work so far. It’s a solid foundation :) I’ll help a bit with the figure overall, although drawing female figures isn’t exactly my strongest area hehe. The head felt slightly disconnected from the body. The torso is also a bit too wide from the side view. Something that helps me maintain more natural proportions is following the line of the neck and connecting it more naturally into the side of the torso. The way the shoulders were drawn also makes the figure feel a bit off, especially the left shoulder, which feels too bulky. Realistically, we wouldn’t see that much of the deltoid from this angle. As for expressions... I’m not the best at them either, but one thing I’ve seen people do is use emojis as a base for facial expressions. It’s actually a pretty fun way to practice expressions. Hope this helps!
