I love your drawing! I would recommend, however, being precise with your lines. Let each line have a purpose and avoid having random lines, especially along the dress.

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Sophia Parisi · 2026-07-21T20:25:55.578Z

This is how I draw it now. If you see any mistakes, please feel free to edit them. I'll definitely appreciate it.

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